TOEFL Essay 42 with model answer:
Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. You should write at lease 300 words.
Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?
Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Model Answer:
The top most important aspect to consider is the quality of education. Many of the countries, particularly the underdeveloped countries of the world, do not have a quality education. They cannot provide the best educational service to the students of the lands. Hence, the students seek opportunities to study abroad. Sometimes, the parents who are aware of the education quality in their native lands, do not want their children to be educated in that country. They know that if the children are educated here, they will not get the exact things. So, the parents prefer their children to be educated in abroad where they will come to know about the modernism.
There is a third category of students who study abroad too. They are from wealthy family. To increase or uphold the status of their family, they go to study abroad. It is also beneficial for them in many aspects too. They can have the chances to know the different things out of their country. But such students do not care that much for their academic activities as they care for the extra-curricular activities. Often their outcomes are unremarkable. I have seen many students belonging to the third category. They went abroad to waste their parental wealth.
But there are some students who really go to study abroad and get some distinctions. I know a student from Africa, who is attending some courses with me, and he is really a genius. He is now at a local university of the USA and pursuing his graduation with me. I found this boy to be extremely sincere with his studies and other academic studies. It appears that he is in the USA to get a higher degree that is unavailable in his land, and he will get back to his country to serve the nation.
Therefore, it appears that most of the students go to study abroad to get a better education which is unavailable in their respective lands. Such attempts need appreciation.
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