TOEFL Essay 4 with model answer:
Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Model Answer:
Children are considered as the future of a nation. The future improvements of a nation actually depend on the children. Someday they will be the nation’s leader and the nation will move for further development under their directions and initiatives. Therefore, taking the right care for the children is a highly important issue for all of us. Many of the people do not have any clear conception to grow up their kids. They are unaware of some important fact about growing up their kids.
Most of the parents are one the view that if the kids live with them in the city, then the kids will be smarter than the kids living in the countrysides. But the idea is wrong. Living in a city always never points that the kids or children will be smarter or more educated than the country kids. The educational system is almost same everywhere in the European subcontinent. So, if you are living in a countryside of the subcontinent, certainly the kids will be able to have a better education.
Moreover, the natural environments of the country areas, which are unavailable in all of the cities across the world, are charming. They help to boost the mental and creative faculty of the children. They learn to think and with proper direction may start exercising their latent talents. The open sky, playing fields, riversides etc. are the most favorable places for them. They can spend their leisure hours on the places. Sometimes the prairie fields also turn a heaven for the kids when they meet in groups and enjoy different games and sports.
But the children in the cities do not have such options. The life in the cities is mechanic. All they have to do is following routines. As a result, the hidden talents of the children do not bloom. They cannot even think clearly over any issue. They lock themselves in a box. But on the other side, the country children are intelligent enough to use their brains and they also think differently.
So, if you want your child to be smarter and intelligent, you should allow them to grow up in the country side with the association of Mother Nature as she is the best teacher.
(Word count = 374)
Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For children, it is better to grow up in the country than in the city.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Model Answer:
Children are considered as the future of a nation. The future improvements of a nation actually depend on the children. Someday they will be the nation’s leader and the nation will move for further development under their directions and initiatives. Therefore, taking the right care for the children is a highly important issue for all of us. Many of the people do not have any clear conception to grow up their kids. They are unaware of some important fact about growing up their kids.
Most of the parents are one the view that if the kids live with them in the city, then the kids will be smarter than the kids living in the countrysides. But the idea is wrong. Living in a city always never points that the kids or children will be smarter or more educated than the country kids. The educational system is almost same everywhere in the European subcontinent. So, if you are living in a countryside of the subcontinent, certainly the kids will be able to have a better education.
Moreover, the natural environments of the country areas, which are unavailable in all of the cities across the world, are charming. They help to boost the mental and creative faculty of the children. They learn to think and with proper direction may start exercising their latent talents. The open sky, playing fields, riversides etc. are the most favorable places for them. They can spend their leisure hours on the places. Sometimes the prairie fields also turn a heaven for the kids when they meet in groups and enjoy different games and sports.
But the children in the cities do not have such options. The life in the cities is mechanic. All they have to do is following routines. As a result, the hidden talents of the children do not bloom. They cannot even think clearly over any issue. They lock themselves in a box. But on the other side, the country children are intelligent enough to use their brains and they also think differently.
So, if you want your child to be smarter and intelligent, you should allow them to grow up in the country side with the association of Mother Nature as she is the best teacher.
(Word count = 374)
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